ADD SIDECHAIN AAAAAAAAAAAAA

Now seriously, the sound design and mixing are decent but a lack of sidechaining can greatly reduce a song's quality. If you did add sidechaining, it's almost non-existent. Make sure to not Oversidechain it to the point that every time a kick hits every sound goes completely silent, there are always sweet spots.
The 2nd melody(?) at 00:42 has a dissonance problem, mainly at the 3rd and 4th bars.
I like the key change at 01:46 but you could have done a bit more with it, and there is some random sound at 02:01.

This track is a pretty decent remake to your other one from 2018. It fixes a lot of the problems I personally found in it (mainly pretty bad mixing and awful drop).

The entire beginning is great. It builds tension really well and the sound design is very good (for the most part). Though after that part it kinda goes downhill:
Right off the bat, I hate the piano sample. It sounds very stock like, and it has no eq or reverb to make it sound somewhat better. The drums are fine, but i really dislike the supposed-to-be snare. maybe its just me liking hard hitting snares more, but i find the sound very disappointing.
Now for the arrangement: this track has no end. There is no actual drop to relieve the tension, so its just building tension until it very suddenly ends. For a casual listener this can be pretty disappointing, because the track goes nowhere. I also found myself skipping through the part at 1:19 because its just the same thing at 0:40. Nothing was changed in it at all, therefore the track doesn't end properly.
In conclusion: consider making a drop next time, and not copy-pasting a part.

took you around a year.
The drops feel empty and unfinished, like there was supposed to be something backing the bass, but one of you forgot to fill it.
The mixing is also weird: the vocals are way too loud, and there is way too much stuff in the treble territory (mainly with the drums, vocals and hihats).
I DO like the melody in the song, and some of the sound design like the bass.
I'm glad you are back to making music, and I hope you are in a better financial position now :)